Thursday, July 22, 2010

w.a.l.t...
  • use winter nouns in our writing
  • use adjectives that describe the nouns

Here is my winter writing.

Slowly winter comes, colder it gets. People start fires for the first winter. Snowballs dropping on your head. Unhappy faces. It's cold like frozen water on people heads. During winter days there are angry people.

The nouns in my writing are green.

The adjectives are purple.

The blue word is a verb.

My goal is to use more verbs in my writing.

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